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jcunningham23 · October 2010

I've been working all afternoon on a potential invitation.
So what do ya think? Spacing look ok? Typos? Hows the flow?

P.S. Disregard the outer doted line.

SaraAndrew2010 · October 2010

If you are not using titles for your parents, the woman's name should go before the man's. So Judy and Reza Smith, Tina and Patrick Jones.

I don't think you need to capitalize two thousand and eleven

kristinanddan · October 2010

Corrected:

Judy and Reza LastName
together with
Tina and Patrick LastName
invite you to share in the joy
of the marriage between
Jessica L Lastname
and
Alex A LastName
Saturday, the eleventh of June
two thousand and eleven
at half after four (iin the afternoon)
Ceremony Site
Ceremony Address
Ceremony Address Cont
Reception immediately following

I switched the parents' names, put the bride before the goom, took out the "on" before Saturday, the year should be lower-case, and it should be half after four.

ootmother2 · October 2010

Include only town and cermony site.. No address on the invite

jessienjeremy · October 2010

You dont put the address on the invite??

How do people know where to go

squirrly · October 2010

If there are multiple places with the same name, the address is fine. No zip code, ever.

However. . . I'm really ok with including the address (no zip) pretty much anytime. Now a days, we have lots of OOT guests - even just an hour away - and that rule was really from back when everybody knew where the First Baptist Church and the Country Club were located. It was to keep the invite from getting too wordy and cluttered with info people didn't need. If they need it, include it.

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