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Hello...I haven;t posted here before, but am hoping you all will look over my vows.  I know they are kind of long, but am not sure what to cut out.  Any ideas?  Thanks!!! EDIT: I went b
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First draft vows

posted at 10/2/2011 8:02 AM EDT on theknot.com
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Hello...I haven;t posted here before, but am hoping you all will look over my vows.  I know they are kind of long, but am not sure what to cut out.  Any ideas?  Thanks!!!

EDIT: I went back and cut some out.  I think they'e pretty good now!!!  Thoughts?

Sean,

You are my one true love and today, you become my husband.  There are so many things that I love about you.  I love your sense of adventure, your sense of humor and the fact that you see beauty in the world when I wouldn’t even have bothered to look. 

You keep me sane when I turn into the biggest worry wart.  You encourage me to try new things and have helped me become a lot less picky (though I still have a long way to go).  You are intelligent and caring; you are everything I want in a partner.

Today, I promise to support you in all endeavors.  I will be your cheerleader and your helper in everything you do.  I promise to laugh with you and explore with you and to do my best to slow down and just enjoy life together.  I will love you unconditionally for the rest of our years. 

In closing, I want to borrow a few words from Katherine Mansfield :

“We two, you know have everything before us, and we shall do very great things-I have perfect faith in us-and so perfect is my love for you that I am, as it were, still, silent to my very soul.  I want nobody but you for my lover and my friend and to nobody but you shall I be faithful.

I am yours forever.”

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Re: First draft vows

posted at 10/2/2011 8:19 PM EDT on theknot.com
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I love them!

Re: First draft vows

posted at 10/10/2011 8:48 PM EDT on theknot.com
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sounds perfect to me. you've got all the bases covered, and threw in a little subtle humor. Nice work!

Re: First draft vows

posted at 10/16/2011 5:26 AM EDT on theknot.com
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Sounds great!

Re: First draft vows

posted at 10/16/2011 5:26 PM EDT on theknot.com
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Very nice!
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Re: First draft vows

posted at 1/8/2012 9:26 PM EST on theknot.com
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Beautiful.

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