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Help wording this? Beach wedding

MrsAutryMrsAutry
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Okay, So i found this example and I love it! But I want it to be changed for my invites.. I like the phrase "seaside ceremony"  ... The wedding invites are to be read as if my parents are inviting everyone. Help please! I'm printing these tonight! 

here's the example :

Please join us, along with our parents, as we Rebecca Ann Linden and Christopher Brian Sterling are united in marriage at a seaside ceremony on Saturday, the fourth of October two thousand eighteen at four o'clock in the afternoon Paradise Island Las Conches, Lot 15 Sonora, Mexico

Here's what I have so far..  And I dont really like it. 
mr. and mrs. Philip St. John request the honor of your presence at the marriage of their daughter Jennifer Paige to Lat Jacob Autry saturday, the seventh of July at six fourty-five in the evening Dune Allen Beach Destin, Florida 
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Re: Help wording this? Beach wedding

  • MrsAutryMrsAutry
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    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/wedding-boards_invites-paper_help-wording-this-beach-wedding?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Wedding%20BoardsForum:cd062f89-8272-496a-b0ab-225e1f87acecDiscussion:889fc3cd-01b1-4d71-8c64-e78340e63fd0Post:de055d19-d19f-47fd-90da-add5c86622e5">Re: Help wording this? Beach wedding</a>:
    [QUOTE]mr. and mrs. Philip St. John request the PLEASURE OF YOUR COMPANY at the SEASIDE MARRIAGE CEREMONY FOR THEIR DAUGHTER Jennifer Paige to Lat Jacob Autry saturday, the seventh of July  QUARTER BEFORE SEVEN O'CLOCK Dune Allen Beach Destin, Florida   Why the odd time of evening?  I think it is going to confuse people.
    Posted by CMGr[/QUOTE]

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    </div><div>Oh i know! I wanted seven, but something with sunset and lighting?? I have no idea! Maybe I  can change it to seven o clock! </div>
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