Feedback on my vows

metalmoliver

So here is my first draft I am sharing with anyone. Tell me what you guys think.

"In you, I have found someone that makes me a better person. You can always make me smile. When you hold me in your arms, I feel safe from anything in the world. I promise to always be there for you. To hold your hand and be by your side where ever God takes us. I promise to support your dreams and encourage you. I promise to never give up on you. You are an amazing man and I am so lucky to become your wife today."

selenathegreat

I think it's very sweet and perfect!

Jen4948

Those are lovely.

metalmoliver

Thanks so much. I was afraid they were too short or maybe a little cheesy. I am glad to hear you liked them.

fre3doms

I think those are really nice. Reminds me a little of my vows that I'm working on.
I'm sure he'll love them.

ahende04

Think these sound good!

missmo14

I agree with PP. Those are excellent.

vt&dt

I also agree.  It is emotional but not nauseatingly sappy, doesn't sound cookie-cutter, is mostly vows & promises, and is a good length.

I'm not sure if you've considered this or not - you might want to have your officiant read both your and your FI's vows just to be sure they're similar in tone and length.  

Good work!  

emilie250

These are really nice!

Only suggestion I'd have is potentially replace "I promise to never give up on you" because it sounds a bit like he has big problems you're helping him work through. Maybe say I promise to stand by your side or something like that.