Another sanity-check request, if you ladies would be so kind. Besides our names and the "RSVP" and "Details" headers which are in a script font, everything else is in an all-caps font, so please ignore my capitalization below...
INVITATION:
Together with their parents
[my] Firstname Lastname
and
[FI] Firstname Lastname
request the pleasure of your company at their wedding
Saturday, October third
two thousand fifteen
at four o'clock in the afternoon
Venuename, Street
City, State
Dinner and dancing to follow
RSVP:
The favor of your response is requested by the twelfth of September
_accepts with pleasure
_declines with regret
Please list any dietary restrictions:
ENCLOSURE:
Room blocks have been reserved at the following hotels. Please mention the Frenchiekin/FI wedding when booking by September 4th. For more information, please visit our website at www[.]website[.]com
Hotel 1
Street
City, State
Phone #
Hotel 2
Street
City, State
Phone #
In addition to an etiquette check, anything that sounds odd or would read better with slightly different wording? Thanks in advance for the help!!