Final draft of vows. Thoughts?

ccostello03

Jason,

You were an unexpected surprise when you walked into my life. Since then you have continued to surprise me. I knew that I loved you when all I can think of was you when I was not with you. Moments spent without you were not the same as those moments that were spent with you. In your arms I have found comfort. In your smile, I have found happiness. In your eyes I found my home and in your heart I have found my love. I promise to support your dreams and endeavors.  Even if those dreams include the Eagles winning the Superbowl. I promise never to give up on what challenges we may face together. I look forward to our new adventure that we’ll embark on and the mark that our love will leave behind when we grow old together. I love you and am honored to become your wife today. 

RailWayWife

I love them. Short, Funny, Personal, Meaningful, Romantic.

Perfet, good job

TLD12

Thats really sweet

bbalr

They are very thoughtful and sweet.

joannami09

Personal, sweet, funny, and romantic. Love them

Lorrrriiieeee

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[QUOTE]Jason, You were an unexpected surprise when you walked into my life. Since then you have continued to surprise me. <strong>I knew that I loved you when all I can think of was you when I was not with you</strong>. Moments spent without you were not the same as those moments that were spent with you. In your arms I have found comfort. In your smile, I have found happiness. In your eyes I found my home and in your heart I have found my love. I promise to support your dreams and endeavors.   Even if those dreams include the Eagles winning the Superbowl. I promise never to give up on what challenges we may face together. I look forward to our new adventure that we’ll embark on and the mark that our love will leave behind when we grow old together. I love you and am honored to become your wife today.  
Posted by ccostello03[/QUOTE]


This is really minimal...and i don't know if you're a stickler for grammar but the tenses in this sentence don't match. I'm an English teacher  so I don't want to sound bitchy...it's just something that would bother me. <img src="http://cdn.cl9.vanillaforums.com/downloaded/ver1.0/content/scripts/tinymce/plugins/emotions/images/smiley-tongue-out.gif" border="0" alt="Tongue out" title="Tongue out" />The words themselves are perfect. Vows can drag on forever but you've found the perfect balance of short/sweet and emotional.

danigirl7181

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[QUOTE]Jason, You were an unexpected surprise when you walked into my life. Since then you have continued to surprise me.<strong> I knew that I loved you when all I can think of was you when I was not with you</strong>. Moments spent without you were not the same as those moments that were spent with you. In your arms I have found comfort. In your smile, I have found happiness. In your eyes I found my home and in your heart I have found my love. I promise to support your dreams and endeavors.   Even if those dreams include the Eagles winning the Superbowl. I promise never to give up on what challenges we may face together. I look forward to our new adventure that we’ll embark on and the mark that our love will leave behind when we grow old together. I love you and am honored to become your wife today.  
Posted by ccostello03[/QUOTE]

<div>I like them but I was going to say somthing about the tenses also....</div>
 I knew that I loved you when all I <strong>could</strong> think of was you when I was not with you.