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can you please check my spelling

I finally finished doing the stationary i was wondering if you ladies dont mind looking over it and see what you think
thank you

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We look forward to celebrating with you.
___ Will attend with pleasure
___ Must decline with regret
Please provide a response before
February 19th, 2011

Reception
The pleasure of your company is requested
at the Reception immediately following
the ceremony.
Cocktail hour starts at 4:30 p.m.
Dinner served at 6:30 p.m.
Dancing 7 : 3 0 p.m.

Mr. And Mrs. Edward
Mr. And Mrs. Mark
request the honor of your presence at the marriage of their children
maria
and
Tracy
Saturday, the twelfth of March
Holy Family Catholic Church, St. Petersburg, Florida
Reception immediately following

Re: can you please check my spelling

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    edited December 2011
    Only thing I see is that the parents name should include the father's first name i.e. Mr. and Mrs. Frank Perez. Also I believe there is no i in 12th, twelfth.
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    ceeceed80ceeceed80 member
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    edited December 2011
    Maria, 


    Here is what I see (in bold and red)... 

    Reception
    The pleasure of your company is requested
    at a Reception immediately following
    the Ceremony.

    Cocktail Hour begins at 4:30 p.m
    Dinner will be served at 6:30 p.m
    Dancing will commence at 7:30 p.m (or something similar, to give it a more formal feel)

    Mr. and Mrs. Edward 
    Mr. and Mrs. Mark 
    request the honor of your presence at the marriage of their children
    Maria
    and
    Tracy
    Saturday, the twelfth of March, two thousand and eleven
    Holy Family Catholic Church, St. Petersburg, Florida
    Reception immediately following
     I hope that helps! :) 
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