I still have A LOT of time before all of this has to be finalized, but I'm playing around with my DIY invites and I'd like your thoughts on the wording... especially regarding the quote at the top because it's in the first person wheras the invitation information is in third person. Even though the quote is in quotation marks, does it still seem weird?
Please keep in mind that capitalization and formatting aren't an issue right now (it all looks different on the actual nice copy)... I'm just looking for insight about the wording.
TIA!!
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“This day I will marry my best friend,
The one I laugh with, live for, dream with, love”
Together with their parents
Bride’s Name
and
Groom’s Name
Invite you to join in the celebration of their marriage
On Sunday, the seventeenth of July
Two thousand eleven
At three thirty in the afternoon
The Manor
111 Prospect Avenue ● West Orange, NJ
~ Cocktail hour and reception to follow ~