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NEED HELP WITH INVITATION WORDING....

osubuckigrl78osubuckigrl78
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Ok, for those who dont know already....
We are getting married in Hawaii with just our parents with us.... Then when we get home we will be having a reception/celebration with our friends and other family members...
This is what i have so far.... thoughts???

We're getting ready to depart
on a romantic trip, which is only the start!

Bride
and
Groom

will be married on
Monday, May 27, 2012
on the North Shores of
Oahu, Hawaii

Please join us for a reception
after we return
Sunday, June 24, 2012
at 5:00 pm

Everal Barn and Homestead
350 N. Cleveland Ave
Westerville, Ohio 43082
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Re: NEED HELP WITH INVITATION WORDING....

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    akrysl22akrysl22
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    Cute!  Do you want to mention your parents at all?  I know formal invites generally have "along with their parents" or something like that.  That would be my only suggestion/comment!
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    MMRoberts11MMRoberts11 member
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    Several things:

    1) You switch from third person to first.  I'd stick with third person.
    2) If the celebration isn't formal don't worry about what I have below:
    I would write out the dates and time.

    Beyond those two things I think it's good.
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