Ok, So I'm working on invitations (A bit early I know, but this summer is really the only time I have to get this stuff done)... I want to know if there are any errors in this. FI and I were trying to figure out for example if it's two thousand and twelve or two thousand twelve... Any input and/or corrections would be appreciated. Also, does "the joining of our families" seem like we have kids or anything like that, and is saying "together with their parents" enough to indicate that they are contributing some to the wedding (we're paying for more than half).
This day I will marry my best friend,
the one I laugh with, live for, dream with, love
Lindsay (Last)
&
Kevin (Last)
together with their parents,
invite you to share in the joy and
celebration of their marriage
and the joining of their families
on Sunday, the twenty-forth of June
two thousand and twelve
at five o’clock
in the evening
The Beachhouse
two hundred Gulf Drive North
Bradenton Beach, FL