Wedding Invitations & Paper

Can you please proofread my invitation

Mr. and Mrs. John Doe
request the honor of your presence
at the marriage of their daughter
Jane Doe
to
John James Smith
son of
Mary Jane Smith
Friday, the third of May
two thousand thirteen
at three o'clock in the afternoon
SS. Cyril & Methodius church
55 Popieluszko court
Hartford, Connecticut
 
A little background... I know I don't need to include my last name since my parents are hosting but I don't have a middle name and think just Jane would look weird.
I want to include my FI mom on the invite, should I include first middle last name or just first last? FI parents got divorced about 10 years ago (and he since has passed away).
Should I spell out "Saints" (instead of SS.)?
Anything else you can think of?
There is no reception info on the invite because I will have a separate reception card.

and the RSVP

We look forward to celebrating with you!
 Please respond by April 19th
 M _________________________________________________
 ______ Accepts with pleasure
 ______ Regretfully declines
 Please initial the entrée choice for each guest
 ______ Chicken
 ______ Beef
 ______ Fish
 
 Thank you!
 
*Edited for formating
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