I am in the process of writing my moh speech. I created a poem but I need opinions as to whether how good it is. All advice is much appreciated.
Today begins the rest of your lives as oneYour journey is just beginningMy wish for the both of youIs that life becomes all that you want it to be I hope your dreams stay big and your worries stay smallI hope the days come easy and the loving moments pass slowAnd each road leads you to where you want to goMy last wish is for your love for each other to deepen and growAnd years from now you will to look back and remember the traveled roadNever forget the love that brought you togetherBecause in the end it that is all that matters