Hi guys,
Please let me know how this wording sounds (caps and lack thereof per the formatting/fonts of the invitation, but I can change):
with great pleasure and joy
Jennifer and Anatole
we invite you to our wedding
THE FOURTH OF OCTOBER
TWO THOUSAND FIFTEEN
AT 3 O'CLOCK IN THE AFTERNOON
RENAISSANCE EVENT HALL
ASTORIA, NEW YORK
dining and dancing to follow
I have a feeling that there are some "no nos" here, particuarly the "dining and dancing to follow" FWIW, the reception is at the same venue as the ceremony, we're having a cocktail hour immediately after the ceremony (4-5) & sit down dinner & reception (5-9), full open bar throughout.
Thoughts on how to fix?