Wedding Invitations & Paper

Please check my wording. Thank you!

Sorry for another wording question!

The pleasure of your company is requested
at the marriage of
Bride's full name
to
Groom's full name
Saturday, the nineteenth of September
two thousand fifteen
at six o’clock
Hill House Venue
123 Road Lane
Houston, Texas   

Reception to follow

We are hosting the wedding ourselves. Ceremony and reception in two different buildings about 50 yards apart from each other but same venue.

Initial questions:
1. Do I need Ms. and Mr. titles? I have seen some invites that have this.
2. Should it stay as is or change the second line to "at the wedding of"?
3. If it needs to change do I also need to change the "to" between our names to "and"?
4. For the time do I need to add "in the evening"? Will someone think it is 6AM?

Why is it just a few lines of type brings up so much anxiety? :)

Thank you in advance!

Re: Please check my wording. Thank you!

  • I would change the "to" to "and".  Other than that, I don't see the need for any changes.  Ms. and Mr. are optional.
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