So I'm looking for some opinions on my STD wording. Sorry if you don't like the cartoons or overall style but I'm really looking for suggestions on the little rhyme at the top. FILs said they thought "booze" had a poor connotation indicating sloppiness or something too casual. My thinking is I'm happy with a "less formal" and more fun STD that people make look at longer on a fridge or something, and then sending out lovely invites that will convey the tone and formality of the event. So far I haven't been able to think of anything clever to replace what I already have. Bottom portion is edited for personal information.
Wedding is a fall vineyard wedding, cocktail attire, sophisticated but a little undone.
TIA