I totally get the "poor" writing that everyone is talking about... I mean how many times can someone really "press their lips in a hard line" without it getting old? Or the “apex” of her thighs... I totally get it the lady could've used a thesaurus in her writing. However, I thoroughly enjoyed the storyline. I felt the characters were deep and even though predictable in some moments they were unpredictable in others. I’m no casual reader either and I usually catch poor writing but I felt the story overrode the repetitive writing.