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Invitation Vote?

Hi guys - We're having trouble deciding between two invite designs.  Anybody care to weigh in?PIB under The Great Invitation Debate.Thanks!

Re: Invitation Vote?

  • edited December 2011
    I like the two branches. It looks more "natural" the single branch looks out of place to me because it really just starts in the middle of the page. I like the look of the branches starting from the side. It adds more depth to the invite. You didn't ask this but are you completely attached to the bird? The colors look a little off to me. I would either choose a different graphic or skip the bird completely. Unless of course the bird has special meaning and you and your guests would understand it . . . JMO
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  • edited December 2011
    I like the one branch invite if you can add something above your names to fill in that space, or change the font to fill in that space.GL!
  • edited December 2011
    I like the one branch too... I agree with Danto.
  • edited December 2011
    The single branch reminds me of flames (with all those lovely colors) creeping up the side of the page.  I like the look of the second invite.  Good luck!
  • BlldandiBlldandi member
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    edited December 2011
    I like the two branches, mostly because they don't just start in the middle of the page.  If you could extend or relocate the one 1 branch I would swing my vote to that.
  • Luv2Cook27Luv2Cook27 member
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    edited December 2011
    I like the one with two branches better, as they look like they are flowing better.  The single branch is nice, however it just looks like it appears out of nowhere.I do have one thought on the birds, they look good, but unless you are totally attached to the white bird I would look for another bird.  The cardinal looks great, the white one looks a little out of place IMO. Great Job on the invites!!  Good luck deciding!
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  • edited December 2011
    I like the one branch, it's a hard choice though. I think the one branch doesn't look as crowded and I like the layout better.
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  • rco118rco118 member
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    edited December 2011
    Thanks, ladies.  I appreciate all the opinions!Thought I might explain the birds.  My Mom's family loves cardinals and FI's family loves cockatiels.  We've been struggling with the birds b/c it is nice tie between our two families, but the cockatiel is not a "wild" bird.  Excellent suggestions on making the one branch "come from" somewhere rather than float!Keep 'em coming!
  • manna1212manna1212 member
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    edited December 2011
    My vote is for the second one. It seems more uniform to me!
  • Mrs BabsMrs Babs member
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    edited December 2011
    I like the second one better but if you could make the first branch come from somewhere then it would swing my vote. I like the idea of having both birds on one branch. Its kinda a "two become one" hidden theme..
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  • ddumireddumire member
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    edited December 2011
    My vote is one branch with birds.  I feel it has a better composition and better use of white space.  The invitation has a more open airy feel to it.  I also really like that it has personal meaning to you.
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