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Invitation Proof

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Hello Ladies! FI and I finally finished designing our invites last night and also picked out the paper we will be having them printed on. Would like to have more eyes proofread to make sure I have no errors and/or typos! Thanks!

(Disregard the Xs on top; they're so I know where to punch the holes)








Thoughts and opinions on the design are more than welcome, as well!!
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Re: Invitation Proof

  • michellep1michellep1 member
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    In the invite, "holy" should be capitalized - "Holy"
    "Two thousand and twelve" should read "Two thousand twelve". 

    On the Accomodations card, I would say "Rooms are reserved for the xx wedding" not "Rooms are reserved under the xx wedding".

    Other than that, I think its really cute!  I like how the decline option is "Can't leave the nest" - very creative and it ties in your birds, nicely done!
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  • slice85slice85
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    On the main invite, take out the "and" in the year so it reads two thousand twelve.

    Would you want to have your names in the green color (like the RSVP date) to make them stand out?  Otherwise I feel like the one splash of color in the text on the RSVP seems a little out of place.

    Nice work!
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    image 284 Invited so far!
    image 173 Are ready to party!
    image 94 Will be missing out!
    image 17 Are MIA!
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  • NindakayNindakay
    100 Comments
    lovely!
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  • MMRoberts11MMRoberts11 member
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    Beyond what others have suggested, I think everything looks great.
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  • [Deleted User][Deleted User]
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    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/wedding-club-boards_june-2012-weddings_invitation-proof-1?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Wedding%20Club%20BoardsForum:3ae4d68d-f10a-4dec-8810-da13c14a7b86Discussion:ad8fd994-7acc-485f-9cb9-ff49534c5493Post:c067dd63-b576-4690-b506-0d4b73f9fdeb">Re: Invitation Proof</a>:
    [QUOTE]On the main invite, take out the "and" in the year so it reads two thousand twelve. Would you want to have your <strong>names in the green color</strong> (like the RSVP date) to make them stand out?  Otherwise I feel like the one splash of color in the text on the RSVP seems a little out of place. Nice work!
    Posted by slice85[/QUOTE]


    How did I not think of this!?!

    Thanks everyone for the input!
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  • 2012FutureMrsB2012FutureMrsB member
    100 Comments Second Anniversary 5 Love Its
    I agree with PP's advice. . .  Looks really cool! I just ordered my invites a few days ago - I'm getting married one hour after you! lol
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