Grammar Check, please

VarunaTT

"Please find enclosed with this letter a copy of Podunk Hospital's Release of Lien for the amount of $302.00."

Release of Lien is the title of the document I'm sending a copy of, belonding to Podunk Hospital.

Wzz

i think belonding is wrong.   

I would write:

"Enclosed with this letter is a copy of Podunk Hospital's Release of Lien for the amount of $302.00."

nicoleg1982v2

Where we would say:

Enclosed please find a copy of Podunk Hospital's Release of Lien in the amount of $302.00.

VarunaTT

So basically, I'm not gramatically incorrect though?  Just different arrangement of what seems like the first three-four words?

B/c Diva has told me it's gramatically incorrect.  HIs wording is better, I think, but I'm just peeved that he's saying my grammar is bad.

His:

"Please find enclosed with this letter a copy of Freeman Hospital’s lien release in the amount of $744.00".

nicoleg1982v2

Neither is wrong, I guess.  Just a matter of style.

VarunaTT

Well, that's what I thought.

I've done too much work w/out any complaint, I suppose. He always has to find something or his day is incomplete.