XP: please help me proof my invite :)

rcj2rcd

Good morning all I posted this on the Catholic Board, but can a Detroit knottie help me proof my invitation, too?

Some background: we are having a full mass and it's important to us to include the names of both sets of parents on the invitations. Also, there will be separate cards that provide information on the reception, directions, accommodations, etc.

TIA!!

Mr. and Mrs. Gomez and Morticia Addams
&
Mr. and Mrs. Vito and Carmella Corleone
request the honour of your presence
at the Nuptial Mass at which their children

Wednesday Friday Addams
&
Michael Middle Name Corleone

will be united in the Sacrament of Holy Matrimony
Saturday, the twenty-fourth of September
two thousand eleven
at two o'clock in the afternoon

Church Name
Church Address

Meg1036

Looks good to me!

I would have put "in which their children" instead of "at which," but I don't actually know which is correct.

Also, since your parent's names come before both of yours, you can leave off your last names if you want.

emarston1

Looks good to me   And I love the fake names.

rak123

The fake names made me LOL.

They look great to me, but I am not the best person for this task.

jamenyha

Looks good. At first I was like, NO WAY! That is crazy that is their names, then I realized they were fake..lol. Blond moment!

rcj2rcd

Thanks!! The "at which" is the proper way, but it sounds odd to me too. I'm trying to think of different ways to word that part. As for the names, yes, they were fake (two of my fav tv-movie families) but the Addams family theme is actually my cell ringer for any calls coming from my mom and dads house lol