Proof my invites pretty please?

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Hopefully this is easy to read... thank you mucho!
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TOGETHER WITH THEIR FAMILIES
Bride
&
Groom
INVITE YOU TO JOIN THEM IN CELEBRATION
AS THEY ARE UNITED IN MARRIAGE
SATURDAY, THE EIGHTEENTH OF SEPTEMBER
TWO THOUSAND TEN
AT FIVE O'CLOCK IN THE EVENING
LOCATION NAME
ADDRESS
SANTA CRUZ, CALIFORNIA
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Reception

DINNER AND DRINKS WILL IMMEDIATELY FOLLOW THE CEREMONY.

VENUE NAME
ADDRESS
SOQUEL, CALIFORNIA
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Barbecue

PLEASE JOIN US IN CONTINUING THE CELEBRATION!

SUNDAY, SEPTEMBER 19, 2010
1 TO 4 P.M.
ADDRESS
SANTA CRUZ, CALIFORNIA

PLENTY OF PARKING IS AVAILABLE ON NAME BOULEVARD.

FOR DIRECTIONS, HOTEL RECOMMENDATIONS AND MORE DETAILS, PLEASE VISIT OUR WEBSITE:
WWW.NAME.COM
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R.S.V.P

KINDLY RESPOND BY SEPTEMBER 1, 2010.

M __________________________

WEDDING                      BARBECUE

      SEPTEMBER 18             SEPTEMBER 19
   ___ ACCEPT                  ___ ACCEPT
   ___ DECLINE                  ___ DECLINE

NUMBER ATTENDING _____

Goldlie11

In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/wedding-boards_etiquette_proof-invites-pretty-please?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Wedding%20BoardsForum:9Discussion:0136c26b-2a5e-4c0b-b36a-9dc06fa5d3c4Post:26621d9b-165c-40a8-ab52-5a10212517c1">Re: Proof my invites pretty please?</a>:
[QUOTE]It is two thousand and ten.    Grammar and math aside, the AND is correct etiquette wise.  sorry also, it's afternoon, not evening
Posted by ootmother2[/QUOTE]
No it's not.  "And" in math means a decimal point.  It's two thousand ten.  <div>
</div><div>OP, it looks fine.  </div>

ThePinkSuperhero

I feel like "INVITE YOU TO JOIN THEM IN CELEBRATION
AS THEY ARE UNITED IN MARRIAGE" is awkward- it sounds a little overwrought to refer back to yourselves 4 times (names once and 3 their/theys).  Perhaps switch to "INVITE YOU TO JOIN IN THE CELEBRATION AS THEY ARE UNITED IN MARRIAGE"?

JanoBean75

In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/wedding-boards_etiquette_proof-invites-pretty-please?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Wedding%20BoardsForum:9Discussion:0136c26b-2a5e-4c0b-b36a-9dc06fa5d3c4Post:0f2d6446-b0d6-46bc-bb05-5d79e5f9eba2">Re: Proof my invites pretty please?</a>:
[QUOTE]In Response to Re: Proof my invites pretty please? : No it's not.  "And" in math means a decimal point.  It's two thousand ten.   OP, it looks fine.  
Posted by Goldlie11[/QUOTE]

A wedding invitation isn't math. Look it up -- it's correct either way.

Evening starts at six o'clock; should be five o'clock in the afternoon.