My invites...any glaring mistakes?

FutureMrsTR

I didn't design them myself, I have not one creative bone in my body, so I can't change too much in the layout.  Just let me know if anything sounds awkward?  I've already been over whether the year should have "and" in it or not and it seems that Crane's and Emily Post both agree that it should so there you go.







Thanks ladies!

danieliza1127

I think it looks great, and is very pretty!

baystateapple

Very pretty!  I like them a lot!

TheSaltyPeanut

I think they look great

BecW2be

PRETTY! I don't see anything wrong in the text. I love them!

FutureMrsTR

Oooh yay, great   Thanks ladies!

kate51485

They are pretty, though I do have to ask why there is "..." between the two sections on the first part?

scoetto

The only thing I noticed was the use of afternoon instead of evening but maybe that's just me. Otherwise, they look great!

opalsky007

Very pretty!

Typically you spell out words like "street" in addresses, and omit zip codes on formal invites. But that's probably getting nitpicky. There's nothing outright wrong with it.

vallyhoo

Really pretty

Calumet

The year should be written as two thousand ten not two thousand AND ten.
Technically.

Calumet

Sorry didn't actually read your post. Saw you made a choice on that.

Schroeder246

They're really beautiful!  However, I was under the impression that "honor of your presence" is reserved for ceremonies that take place in a house of worship.  It looks like yours isn't, so you'd want to replace it with "pleasure of your company".  HTH!

lizstill13

Those are very pretty!