Help!! Does this sound right?

ellenalabama

I posted b4 on how to word this and got some good suggestions!  This is what I decided (I think lol):

Mr. and Mrs. Paul and Diane Jones, and the late Steven Clark,
Request the honour of your presence at the marriage of their daughter

                      Brooke Ellen Clark

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What do you ladies think?  Oh, and btw, Michaels Crafts has invitations on sale this week.  I got 30 for $24.99 plus I had a 30% off coupon they let me use!!! Yay!  Much better than the ones I was going to order online for $230 for 30!  If I could figure out how I would post pics lol

                        

Kmills811

I think that sounds great.

dvohnout

Sounds good! My mother is deceased, but I didn't want my stepmom's name on there, so I just left everyone off and went with "together with thier families" I really like yours!

RachNRich

It sounds great!

**FYI---you should remove the last name(s) from your post just to be safe!

ellenalabama

Good idea Rach, I changed them.  Thanks