Please help me with my invitations!

Snowangel2012

Hey guys! I will be ordering my invitations tomorrow and wanted some opinions on them, please be honest! Thanks!

coraleetbwed

You need to add the year and I don't think you're supposed to use ampersands (&); instead substitute with and.

You're ordering your invitations a year in advance?

Snowangel2012

Oooo...I did forget the year, thanks!!!!

The only reason I was ordering them now was because I have some groupons for vistaprint that were about to expire tomorrow. I figured even if we end up hating them, or moving the wedding I only spent like 30 dollars on them, so  I figured it was worth the risk...lol.

banana468

A few things:

-I'm not a fan of the phrase at the beginning.  It just adds extra 'stuff' to the invitation that doesn't serve a purpose.    BUT, if you insist upon it being there the tense needs to change to the third person.

-Personally, I prefer 'Together with their parents' as the first line unless there's a flow issue.  That's just a preference.

-Your parents names should not be connected with 'and'.  Just leave them as two separate lines and remove the ampersand.

-The time is half AFTER and not half past three.

jennylove810

I think you need to not rush invitations just because you have a Groupon deal.  I get wanting to save money, but it's still a waste if they end up not being used.