Wedding Invitations & Paper

Please check my wording..Thanks!!!

How beautiful is the day
that is touched by love
Mr. Kenneth Smith

Ms. Roberta Smith
request the honour of your presence
at the marriage of their daughter
Amanda Marie
to
Michael Phillip Jones
Saturday, April twenty-first
Two thousand and twelve
One o'clock in the afternoon
Name of Catholic Church
Address

Re: Please check my wording..Thanks!!!

  • Parents are divorced.
  • Put your mother first and you're good to go!
  • Yes, your mom should come first and it should be:
    the twenty-first of April

    CMGr and I disagree on the use of Mr. Traditionally your FH would get a title. But I find that horribly awkward and skewed to have every person on the invitation with a title except the bride.

    And I personally would keep "in the afternoon" (it's optional, and just plain one o'clock looks too abrupt for my taste).
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