Wedding Invitations & Paper

Help in wording...

Hello ladies,
How do you word your invitation when the whole family pitched in for the wedding. In my case both of our set of parents are no longer together. So we wanted to say something like :

Family Smith/ Johnson
and
Family Thompson/Burger

request the honour of your presence
at the marriage of
Jane Elizabeth Smith
to
Mr. Stephen James Richardson
on Saturday, the ninth of June
two thousand and four
at two o'clock
First Church of Christ
219 North Granby Road
Granby, Connecticut
Is that strange? Or do you guys have a better idea on how to represent all the 4 family names without it weird.
Let me know, thanks

Re: Help in wording...

  • Together with their families

    Miss Jane Elizabeth Smith
    and
    Mr. Stephen James Richardson

    request the honour of your presence
    at their marriage

    on Saturday, the ninth of June
    two thousand and four
    at two o'clock

    First Church of Christ
    219 North Granby Road
    Granby, Connecticut
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    Married: 2010
    Mom to J: 2011
    Mom to H: 2014

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  • If you wanted to use their names, could you say something like

    She-Ra, Daughter of King Randor and Queen Marlena
    Request the honor of your presence of her marriage to

    GI Joe, Son of GI Joe Dad and GI Joe Mom
    On Saturday the 3rd of April...

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