Here is what we have so far. Please help. I think the underline part might be too wordy. It is a church ceremony. Suggestions? Before we just had "invite you to join as they begin their new life together".
This day I will marry my best friend,
the one I laugh with, live for, dream with, love.
Jennifer Kristine
And
Corey Michael
Together with their parents invite you to share in the joy
when they exchange marriage vows and
begin their new life together
on Friday
The Tenth of August, Two Thousand Twelve
half past three o’clock in the afternoon
Pilgrim Lutheran Church
Warwick, RI