Wedding Invitations & Paper

Invite wording suggestions?

Here is what we have so far. Please help. I think the underline part might be too wordy. It is a church ceremony. Suggestions? Before we just had "invite you to join as they begin their new life together".

 

This day I will marry my best friend,

the one I laugh with, live for, dream with, love.

 

Jennifer Kristine 

And

Corey Michael 

 

Together with their parents invite you to share in the joy

when they exchange marriage vows and

begin their new life together

on Friday

The Tenth of August, Two Thousand Twelve

half past three o’clock in the afternoon

Pilgrim Lutheran Church

Warwick, RI

 

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Re: Invite wording suggestions?

  • First, take your personal information out of your post - the internet is full of crazy.

    It's pretty wordy.  I prefer simple and basic:

    Together with their parents
    Bride
    and
    Groom
    Invite you to share in their joy as they unite in marriage
    where when etc etc
  • invite you to share in the joy   their joy?
  • I took last name off. Next time ill just put bride and groom.
    You mean full state like Rhode Island and Providence Plantations? Yes it is a wedding invite.
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