Proof my invitation wording

sb52584

Hi girls! Mine are pretty traditional, but I just want to double check these before they go off to the printer! Thanks so much!

Mr. and Mrs. Steven XXX
request the honour of your presence
at the marriage of their daughter
Sarah Elizabeth
to
Daniel Christian XXX
Saturday, the fifth of June
Two thousand and ten
at two o'clock in the afternoon
Our Lady of the Rosary Chapel
Address
City, State

Reception card:
Kindly respond on or before
May 1, 2010
M__________
Please indicate number of each
__Chicken Marsala ____Prime Rib
____Herb-Crusted Salmon

What do you think? Any changes needed?

kristinanddan

The "t" in two thousand should not be capitalized.

You'll also get lots of comments telling you the "and" in the year is wrong, but if you like the way it sounds with it there, leave it. This is grammar, not math.

squirrly

On the reception card, because you used honour of your presence on the invite, you should use favour of a reply.  They're supposed to go together.