Wedding Invitations & Paper

Please proofread my invitation and response card and let me know what you think


 

 

 

Mr. and mrs. richard XXXX

and

mr. and mrs. gabriel YYYY

request the honor of your presence

at the marriage of their children

Melissa Jeanne XXX

and

Michael YYYY

on

saturday, the twenty-fifth of june

two thousand and eleven

at two o’clock in the afternoon

sacred heart church

address (no zip)




 

Mr. and mrs. richard lopes

and

mr. and mrs. gabriel yorio

request the honor of your presence

at the marriage of their children

Melissa Jeanne Lopes

and

Michael Yorio

on

saturday, the twentififth of june

two thousand eleven

at two o’clock in the afternoon

at sacred heart church
1321 centre street

newton centre, ma

 
 

 

THE FAVOR OF REPLY IS REQUESTED BY

JUNE 10, 2011

M______________________________


___ ACCEPTS WITH PLEASURE

 

___ DECLINES WITH REGRETS

 

PLEASE INITIAL ENTRÉE CHOICE FOR EACH GUEST

______ NEW ENGLAND CRUSTED COD

                 ______PETITE FILET OF BEEF/HERB GRILLED CHICKEN

______VEGETARIAN

 

DIETARY RESTRICTIONS________________________________

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Re: Please proofread my invitation and response card and let me know what you think

  • Oops! That didn't quite workout.  Please just let me know what you think of the wording and forget about the alignment. 
  • On the RSVP, "___ DECLINES WITH REGRETS"  should be "Declines with regret" (no "s") for parallel structure with the word "pleasure"

    Also, is the petite filet of beef going to be served WITH the chicken? I find that line a little confusing
  • If your parents' last names are on the invitaiton (and they are) you just put your first and middle name. Same for your FI.
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  • Thank you for all your feedback.  I will make my changes ASAP.  Also, about my response card entree choices, the filet and chicken is a combination plate.  This was one way to get around having a third entree charge.   
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