Proofing Request, please! :)

chiboo9

 

INVITATION:
Together with their parents

Bride’s Full Name
and
Groom’s Full Name

request the honor of your presence
as they are united in marriage

Saturday, the twenty-ninth of September
two thousand twelve
four o'clock in the afternoon

Church Name
123 North Street
Mount City, State

RSVP CARD:
The favor of a reply is requested by the eighth of September   

M ___________________________

___ Will attend
___ Will not attend

or

___ Number attending
___ Will not attend

Which option should I use?

RECEPTION CARD:
RECEPTION

The pleasure of your company is requested
six o’clock in the evening

Reception Venue
123 West Any Road
Mount City, State

 ACCOMODATIONS CARD:
ACCOMODATIONS

A block of rooms has been reserved at the following location

Hotel Name

123 East Any Road
Mount City, State  (should I include zip, for clarification?)
Phone number

Please reference the Last Name/Last Name wedding when making your reservation.

For more information, please visit our wedding website at www.wedding.com

 

 ** The copy in bold will not print. It's just to differentiate the invitation from the cards. Plese let me know what edits are needed. TIA!! **

 

chiboo9

Got it, thanks so much!

LeiselEB

Invite looks good

For the RSVP, I like "number attending" and "will not attend" or "declines" best. 

For reception: "The pleasure of your company is request at a reception

beginning at six o'clock

For the Accommodations (spelling!) card, I'd put a space between the phone number and the "reference the so and so wedding" line. 

Good work!

chiboo9

LeiselEB, thanks! I 've been stalking the board for proper etiquette with wording and followed your advice, along with other ladies on the board. You all have been so very helpful, thank you!