Wedding Invitations & Paper

Rehearsal dinner invitations

FI and I are hosting our rehearsal dinner. It is going to be a picnic on the beach (our ceremony venue) immediately following rehearsal. We are inviting wedding party members, their significant others and children, our parents, and a several other VIPs... about 30 people total. We want to send out invitations, but I am having a hard time wording them. 

So far, this is what I have: 

Please join us
For a rehearsal picnic in honor of our wedding party and families
Friday, September 9, 2011
Immediately following ceremony rehearsal at 2pm
Location

Suggestions? Critiques? Comments?
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