Wedding Invitations & Paper

Rehearsal dinner invitations

FI and I are hosting our rehearsal dinner. It is going to be a picnic on the beach (our ceremony venue) immediately following rehearsal. We are inviting wedding party members, their significant others and children, our parents, and a several other VIPs... about 30 people total. We want to send out invitations, but I am having a hard time wording them. 
So far, this is what I have: 
Please join usFor a rehearsal picnic in honor of our wedding party and familiesFriday, September 9, 2011Immediately following ceremony rehearsal at 2pmLocation
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