Can you look at my invite wording/formatting?

CCBelATC · April 2010

HI Ladies,

I'm not sure what needs to be capitalized and what doesn't. I really don't want to have all capital letters or all lowercase letters for the entire invitation. I used three different sources to pull my wording together, and am not sure it all flows together like it should. Suggestions welcomed!!!! TIA!

I just realized I don't know how to PIP. This is pretty close to actual formatting...

Together with their parents Dawn Middle Last name&Keith Middle Last name request the pleasure of your companyat their marriageSunday, the eighteenth of Julytwo thousand tentwo o’clock in the afternoonJY Windmill3 OC RoadPretty place, MAReception immediately following atThe Inn

girl2bewed · April 2010

Looks pretty good! Usually the names are like this instead of using the & sign:
First middle last
and
First middle last

You need to insert "and" in the year it should be: two thousand and ten
Insert "at" before the time: at two o'clock in the afternoon
And you should spell out MA instead of abbreviating it.

The only other thing is the placement of at the Inn looks weird. Is there an addrses you need to include below the Inn? I woner if dropping "at" would look better.

girl2bewed · April 2010

Oh and all the capitilization looks perfect to me

Can you look at my invite wording/formatting?

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