Invite Wording for Divorced Parents

Re: Invite Wording for Divorced Parents

• catarntina member

  

  September 2011 edited December 2011

  This looks correct to me.
  
  The "twenty-fourth" should be hyphenated.
  I believe "two thousand eleven" should be lowercased.
  
  But otherwise I think it's correct.
  

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• ootmother2 member

  

  September 2011 edited December 2011

  In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/cultural-wedding-boards_catholic-weddings_invite-wording-divorced-parents?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Cultural Wedding BoardsForum:615Discussion:79b7fbc7-5249-40e7-920a-458f66bc6b75Post:d48d3dbe-0dfc-4816-9082-1ec0221eafe8">Invite Wording for Divorced Parents</a>:
  [QUOTE]I planned on including my last name since it differs from my mom's.... Does this look okay grammatically? THanks!!
  
  
  Mr. William LastName and Mr. and Mrs. Donald LastName 
  
  <strong><em>Mom's name comes first, don't use and between the names, seperate lines</em></strong>
  
  request the honour of your presence at the Nuptial Mass at which their daughter  Lauren Bey LastName  and Justin Paul LastName
  
  <strong><em>drop the bride's last name and ad Mr. before the groom</em></strong>
  
  
  will be united in the Sacrament of Holy Matrimony on Saturday, the twenty fourth of March Two thousand twelve
  
  <strong><em>Two thousand and twelve (bad math but correct etiquette)</em></strong>
   
  
  at three o’clock in the afternoon  St. Paul Catholic Church  1800 12th Street North  Anytown, Florida
   
  
  <strong><em>the street number is not usually included</em></strong>
  
  
  
  We will have inserts in our pocket invites with reception info. 
  Posted by ltetidrick[/QUOTE]

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