Invitation Wording Help

sjhansen28 · February 2012

Here's what I have so far for our invite wording:

sjhansen28
daughter of Mom and Dad
and
sjhansen28's FI
son of Mom and Dad
invite you to share

in our marriage celebration
of love, devotion, and family

on Saturday, the ninth of June
two thousand twelve
at two o'clock in the afternoon
Church

Address

What do you guys think? I like the sentiment of the bolded part, but I'm not so sure I like the exact wording. I might just be overthinking it as usual, so any opinions or suggestions would help!

Thanks!

janeash · February 2012

I like it. It's simple and to the point. The bold part is good. if you want to spice it up a bit, you can always add a short quote. My invites say "This day, I will marry my best friend. The one I laugh with, live for, dream with, love" at the very top and then we get into the names. But I like the way yours is worded anyways.

This website http://www.invitationconsultants.com/sw-wedding.aspx has lots of good ideas as well if you want to compare.