Checks :)

TEEDAH226 · February 2012

I purchased my flower girl dresses (they;ll be here today), paid off my wedding venue deposit and completed my invitation mock up

I go to look at wedding dresses this afternoon and meet with my photographer tomorrow morning.

I included my invitation below:

PLEASE JOIN US FOR A CELEBRATION

OF FRIENDSHIP, LOVE AND FAMILY AS

BEST FRIENDS

Bride Name

AND

Groom Name

REQUEST YOUR BLESSING IN THIS MATRIMONIAL DAY

SUNDAY, JUNE 17, 2012

1 PM

VENUE

BALTIMORE, MD

Dinner Reception To Follow

Kfudge0714 · February 2012

congrats on the checks! I'm a little confused? I think your invite might be missing something.. it says "as best friends NAME and NAME request your blessing...." as what?

peachykeen26 · February 2012

It means that as best friends BRIDE and GROOM request the blessing.
Best friends is referring to the BRIDE and GROOM.
However, I agree. The wording for the invitation is a little confusing.

And techinically, there should be a comma before and but after love for proper grammer.
I would also remove best friends from your invitation, IMHO, because it's wordy to me and not really easy to understand.
Otherwise, it's good and gets the point across. Just be careful with heavy wording.

TEEDAH226 · February 2012

The word best friends, gone lol

kimiandgary · February 2012

IMO, I would put "on THEIR matrimonial day".

Congrats on the checks! I'm worried my FG will outgrow her dress if we order it now..

goodine11 · February 2012

Why did you take away bestfriends. It made sense. when they see matirmonal day

MMRoberts11 · February 2012

I like the invite but I would only put "request your blessing" on one line and "ON this matrimonial day" on the other. Oh, you have "in" for this day but it should be on. I would also write out 1pm.

TEEDAH226 · February 2012

Thanks ladies

goodine11 · February 2012

I am continuing to work on the sea shell bouquets

Checks :)

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