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Proof Me!

peachykeen26peachykeen26 member
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Hey ladies. 
Can you proof my invite? I don't see anything wrong, but I have been staring at it for a week.
Here is the link:

And the RSVP:

Just ignore our last names. :)
Thanks!
Also, the reason we are only offering one hotel is because all of the other hotels in the area are A) booked or B) wayyy too expensive ($150+ plus taxes)
This is one of the better hotels in the area and within budget! :)

Thanks girls!

ETA:
For those who can't open it:
Invitation: (It has our names spelled out across it in huge letters)

The pleasure of your company is requested at the celebration of their marriage
Tuesday, the twenty-sixth of June
Two thousand twelve
Half after three o'clock
The Everal Barn
and the address goes here

Then the RSVP/Accomodations:

Please Respond By:
May 26, 2012
M___________________
___ Accepts with Pleasure
___ Regretfully Declines

Please join us for an early dinner

Accomodations
Hotel Name
Hotel Address
Hotel Information
To receive the group rates please reserve your room by June 24, 2012
Account Number: Blah, blah, blah



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  • jaime10285jaime10285 member
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    I believe it should be "half past three o'clock" but it looks good besides that.
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  • kelsey+brandonkelsey+brandon
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    Can you post the texts in your post? It won't let me open it on my iPad.

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  • PinkRoseAcctPinkRoseAcct
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    I think it should be "the twenty-sixth of June" ie lose the "day", and three o'clock should be spelled out, not a numeral.  Otherwise, really good!
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  • peachykeen26peachykeen26 member
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    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/wedding-club-boards_june-2012-weddings_proof?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Wedding%20Club%20BoardsForum:3ae4d68d-f10a-4dec-8810-da13c14a7b86Discussion:4782dead-ff73-465b-b2a4-c327ce2dc28cPost:42af4970-85fa-45e4-89e6-fc1f03ea2395">Re: Proof Me!</a>:
    [QUOTE]I believe it should be "half past three o'clock" but it looks good besides that.
    Posted by jaime10285[/QUOTE]

    <div>Emily Post said half after.</div>

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  • peachykeen26peachykeen26 member
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    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/wedding-club-boards_june-2012-weddings_proof?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Wedding%20Club%20BoardsForum:3ae4d68d-f10a-4dec-8810-da13c14a7b86Discussion:4782dead-ff73-465b-b2a4-c327ce2dc28cPost:4f1d5a34-07d6-4512-b795-3fb02f99be23">Re: Proof Me!</a>:
    [QUOTE]I think it should be "the twenty-sixth of June" ie lose the "day", and three o'clock should be spelled out, not a numeral.  Otherwise, really good!
    Posted by PinkRoseAcct[/QUOTE]

    <div>Good points. I thought I had fixed the 3... See, been staring at it too long!</div>

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  • MMRoberts11MMRoberts11 member
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    edited December 2011
    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/wedding-club-boards_june-2012-weddings_proof?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Wedding%20Club%20BoardsForum:3ae4d68d-f10a-4dec-8810-da13c14a7b86Discussion:4782dead-ff73-465b-b2a4-c327ce2dc28cPost:f92a0855-74eb-4d9b-b5f2-d79026f48104">Re: Proof Me!</a>:
    [QUOTE]In Response to Re: Proof Me! : Emily Post said half after.
    Posted by peachykeen26[/QUOTE]

    I've heard this in other places too and that you would use after since past is for funerals.

    The only other thing I would do is add "of" before their marriage.
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  • peachykeen26peachykeen26 member
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    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/wedding-club-boards_june-2012-weddings_proof?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Wedding%20Club%20BoardsForum:3ae4d68d-f10a-4dec-8810-da13c14a7b86Discussion:4782dead-ff73-465b-b2a4-c327ce2dc28cPost:9e42cba8-e333-4a7d-8674-ad62d908756d">Re: Proof Me!</a>:
    [QUOTE]In Response to Re: Proof Me! : I've heard this in other places too and that you would use after since past is for funerals. The only other thing I would do is add "of" before their marriage.
    Posted by MMRoberts11[/QUOTE]<div>
    </div><div>Oh yes. That is in the invitation. Just a typo on re writing them. :)

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  • kelsey+brandonkelsey+brandon
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    I don't think you need "at the celebration." it just feels a bit too wordy. And ditto to PP about the day and time.

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