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STD and hotel group booking

allykat08allykat08 member
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Does this wording make sense? I'm including a small buisness card sized paper in my STD's to let my guests know about our hotel block...

Hotel Accommodations can be made at

The Marriott in my city

On this Road.

In this city, state and zip

At this phone #

Mention the “Bride/Groom Last name Wedding Room Block” for group rate of $89/night + tax

Complimentary shuttle service provided to and from Wedding Reception with hotel booking

Thanks ladies!! :)
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    allykat08allykat08 member
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    I realized I forgot to put when you must book by, so I added that at the end...

    Hotel Accommodations can be made at

    The Marriott in my city

    On this Road.

    In this city, state and zip

    At this phone #

    Mention the “Bride/Groom Last name Wedding Room Block” for group rate of $89/night + tax

    Complimentary shuttle service provided to and from Wedding Reception with hotel booking
    Must book by March 7, 2013
    Check out what I have left for sale...
    http://allisonandcorey.weebly.com/


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    getaclue44getaclue44 member
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    Is there a minimum number of nights guests must book? Otherwise it is exactly what I did except we had two hotels with different price points.
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    allykat08allykat08 member
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    Nope, no minimum number of nights needed to book. Thanks so much for assuring me that it looks ok! :)
    Check out what I have left for sale...
    http://allisonandcorey.weebly.com/


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    libby2483libby2483 member
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    Overall, it looks good.  The following words don't need to be capitalized: accommodations, wedding, reception.  I'm not sure if you just formatted it like this beause you aren't putting in the actual phone number and address, but you don't have to say "on" or "in" - just list the address and phone number.  Also, in the last line, I would use "please" instead of "must".
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    MoxieMickieMoxieMickie member
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    Instead of "please" or "must" book by, I would phrase it as "rooms will be released by DATE" or "the rate will be honored until DATE," etc. Someone not spending a lot of time thinking about this or who isn't used to room blocks might not understand it's a deadline rather than your planning preference.
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