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help me with the wording - vistaprint is having some sort of crazy sale today

jeffandjazzgetmarriedjeffandjazzgetmarried member
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Because you have shared in our lives, together with our parents, Ms. XX and Mrs. X and Mr. XX request the pleasure of your company at the marriage of  XX to XX

Is that too wordy?
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Re: help me with the wording - vistaprint is having some sort of crazy sale today

  • JoanE2012JoanE2012 member
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    Yes, I'd leave off the "because you have shared in our lives".
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  • jeffandjazzgetmarriedjeffandjazzgetmarried member
    Third Anniversary 10 Comments
    Yes my parents are divorced and my dad isn't in my life. However, my mother and my fiancee's parents are helping us pay so shouldn't it be Together with our parents at the minimum. 

    So 

    Together with their parents
    Bride's Name
    &
    Groom's Name
    Request the please of your company
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