Can you please proof my invite and offer any suggestions/edits?
Below are the edits i already want to make. Anything else I'm missing? (Ignore the black border...that won't be there on the actual invite)
Invite:
- should be spelled “beginning”
- Sunday should be put on the same line as the date (the fourteenth of October two thousand twelve) with a comma after Sunday
- Remove the word “on” after “marriage vows”
- It should just say “Reception to follow” Remove “at half past seven in the evening”
RSVP:
- Change the font color of “the” in “the fifteenth of September” to match the color of “of September” so that only the “fifteenth” is in the lighter purple

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