October 2012 Weddings

Please proof my invite/RSVP card

Can you please proof my invite and offer any suggestions/edits?

Below are the edits i already want to make.  Anything else I'm missing?  (Ignore the black border...that won't be there on the actual invite)


Invite:

  • should be spelled “beginning”
  • Sunday should be put on the same line as the date (the fourteenth of October two thousand twelve) with a comma after Sunday
  • Remove the word “on” after “marriage vows”
  • It should just say “Reception to follow”  Remove “at half past seven in the evening”

 

RSVP:

- Change the font color of “the” in “the fifteenth of September” to match the color of “of September” so that only the “fifteenth” is in the lighter purple




 


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Re: Please proof my invite/RSVP card

  • Half past is usually reserved for funerals. Half after is used for weddings. I personally don't like "accepts with pleasure or declines with regret" . People may happily decline. But it's not incorrect, just my own personal preference.
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  • In Response to Re:Please proof my invite/RSVP card:[QUOTE]Half past is usually reserved for funerals. Half after is used for weddings. I personally don't like quot;accepts with pleasure or declines with regretquot; . People may happily decline. But it's not incorrect, just my own personal preference. Posted by snuff9861[/QUOTE]

    Dangit...I told the designer to put half after when I sent her the wording...She must have missed it. Thanks!
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  • love the hombre invites!!
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