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Please proof my invite!!

cpasqualecpasquale member
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in September 2012 Weddings
Hi ladies,

Could you please proof my invitation? I'd like to send it back to my FMIL to get her started so she has plenty of time to complete them. Any comments would be GREATLY appreciated.

Thanks!!!!




Sept. 2012 May Siggy Challenge: Honeymoon
Greece (Athens, Mykonos, Naxos, Santorini)
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Re: Please proof my invite!!

  • celticmysscelticmyss member
    1000 Comments Second Anniversary
    My only thought would be to have it say "Please let us know if you can make it" on the rsvp card. You do have please on the headcount though so I don't know if that is redundant. 

    Other than that they look good and I like the design! 
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  • volleygurl0306volleygurl0306 member
    1000 Comments Second Anniversary
    I agree with the "please let us know" for the RSVP...it just softens it a little
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  • nicknuttncnicknuttnc member
    Fifth Anniversary 500 Comments
    I agree. I know you are trying to be polite but too many pleases.....
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  • lbarr088lbarr088
    2500 Comments Second Anniversary Combo Breaker
    I think it looks fine.  I initially agreed with celtic about the "please" but that would requier some re-wording and I don't think it's that big of a deal.  Too many pleases will be redundant.
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  • cpasqualecpasquale member
    100 Comments
    Thanks ladies!!!
    Sept. 2012 May Siggy Challenge: Honeymoon
    Greece (Athens, Mykonos, Naxos, Santorini)
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