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Quick Help! Proof read my invite wording PLEASE!!

AmberBride1AmberBride1
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This is somewhat non-traditional, please let me know what you think.  There is a separate cocktail hour and then the reception-- is the current wording misleading?  Yes, I know it's really late to send these but the wedding planning didn't really start until September.  They will go out over the weekend and RSVP requests will be for the end of October.  Thanks in advance!!"With joyous heartsWe invite you to attend the wedding ofAmber Bride WifeyandKirk Groom Hubbyand to celebrate the union with our parentsBill and Jill Burlygirly &Fred and Ginger ManlyhubbyNovember 14, 2009Four O'clockHouse of Blues Cleveland308 Euclid AvenueCleveland, OhioCocktails and reception to immediately follow"
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Re: Quick Help! Proof read my invite wording PLEASE!!

  • ayamm1123ayamm1123 member
    Knottie Warrior 100 Comments
    edited December 2011
    I would add the day of the week minimum and consider using the traditional date written out in wordsEX: Saturday, the fourteenth of November two thousand nineat four o'clock in the afternoonlooks good otherwise
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  • JoeyOzJoeyOz member
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    edited December 2011
    I agree with pp. Just change the last part to Saturday, the fourteenth of November and you'll be good to go!
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  • AmberBride1AmberBride1
    10 Comments
    edited December 2011
    Thanks so much!  I would have missed that!
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