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please come criticize my vows

embreenembreen member
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i wrote a first draft of my vows and i would like HONEST but not mean opinions please

from the moment i first saw you, i knew you were the one with whom i wanted to share my life. Your heart, mind and strength inspire me to be the best person i can be. I vow to help create a life we can cherish and to support you in every endeavor. I vow to grow old by your side as your love and best friend and i vow to be faithful and to love you for all eternity.

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  • tamaraandgarretttamaraandgarrett
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    I like them if you are looking to be 100% serious and romantic. They are well written and your word choice is very good and is def. not boring! I am working to begin mine..good luck!
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  • embreenembreen member
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    his are going to be entertaining, hes adding in "i promise to be on time", i wanted mine to be more romantic
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  • tamaraandgarretttamaraandgarrett
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    That works! I really think you can see the emotion in them!
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  • Jayceestar27Jayceestar27 member
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    I think they are nice. :) The best i could come up with is "I promise to never make Hamburger helper and to pull your gross socks rightside out before I wash them." haha..
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  • embreenembreen member
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    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/special-topic-wedding-boards_vows_please-come-criticize-my-vows?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Special%20Topic%20Wedding%20BoardsForum:24Discussion:4d8c8c0a-8f81-46d4-a2fd-8500a2433db6Post:443150ea-8b95-4027-9e1e-82b4be5936e5">Re: please come criticize my vows</a>:
    [QUOTE]I think they are nice. :) The best i could come up with is "I promise to never make Hamburger helper and to pull your gross socks rightside out before I wash them." haha..
    Posted by Jayceestar27[/QUOTE]

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    </div><div>perfect!</div>
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  • AddieCakeAddieCake member
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    I think you did a really nice job on them!
    What did you think would happen if you walked up to a group of internet strangers and told them to get shoehorned by their lady doc?~StageManager14
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  • shaygray88shaygray88 member
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    love it!!
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  • jessandkelljessandkell
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    I like them!! They are so sweet. We are still deciding on writing our own or going traditional... Decisions decisions....! Laughing
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  • at_last08at_last08 member
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    I love everything but the first line. the first line sounds kind of cliche to me. Without that line I think the vows sound more sincere and original.
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  • embreenembreen member
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    i wasnt thrilled with the first line either...
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  • beardownbchsbeardownbchs member
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    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/special-topic-wedding-boards_vows_please-come-criticize-my-vows?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Special%20Topic%20Wedding%20BoardsForum:24Discussion:4d8c8c0a-8f81-46d4-a2fd-8500a2433db6Post:443150ea-8b95-4027-9e1e-82b4be5936e5">Re: please come criticize my vows</a>:
    [QUOTE]I think they are nice. :) The best i could come up with is "I promise to never make Hamburger helper and to pull your gross socks rightside out before I wash them." haha..
    Posted by Jayceestar27[/QUOTE]

    <div>LOL I'm putting "I vow to always empty your pockets before I wash your pants" to mine because he ALWAYS leaves something in his pockets. </div>
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  • Knottie_22387362Knottie_22387362

    I like the tweaked version :)

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