Untraditional invite for AHR

breaness · April 2011

What do you guys think? I threw this together in about 5 minutes at work so no feelings hurt if you tear it apart.

We're just very untraditional and using the typical stuffy (IMO) wording just really wouldn't match the type of party that we're trying to throw

motoLyn · April 2011

I like the invite itself. Just looking at it made me connect a piano theme. The wording definitely isn't traditional. I honestly like un-traditional invites, yet there's something about the "nothing?" part that strikes me as odd. Otherwise the rest of the wording, color and formatting is awesome.

breaness · April 2011

The piano theme is intentional. We're having dueling pianos at the party and the entertainment is really at the center of the whole thing

ETA: any suggestions on something better?

meldyan84 · April 2011

I like it! Very cute!

carrieoz_76 · April 2011

I love the design and aesthetic. As for wording, I agree that it could be improved. I'd try to make so the question asks for a yes, which sounds more positive. So something like this?

Are you available on _____? Yes? Fantastic!

or

Want to join us on _____? Yes? Fantastic!

Otherwise, it's really cute. Nice work!

maui2011 · April 2011

Totally agree with Carrie...love the look...very cute and unique...however the wording can be improved upon. I really like Carrie's suggestions. Thx. J. :-)

breaness · April 2011

Thanks for the suggestions!

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