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check out my invitation suite please

ral11ral11 member
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in Wedding Invitations & Paper
Thoughts,critiques are much appreciated .  I used Adobe Illustrator to come up with a design and this is what I have so far.  Thanks so much


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Re: check out my invitation suite please

  • abt87abt87 member
    Sixth Anniversary 10 Comments 5 Love Its Name Dropper
    Just noticed a few errors. Not completing the parentheses on RSVP card, and "a block of hotels rooms have been reserve a"  instead of at. Just double check grammar.  Moev up the ceremony paragraph so it's not interfering with the lower left flower
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  • coraleetbwedcoraleetbwed member
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    I love your overall design, but just a few suggestions...

    A block of rooms is reserved at...

    Also, the invitation text is not centered and the rest of the text needs to be "prettied up" as far as being lined up.
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  • coraleetbwedcoraleetbwed member
    500 Comments
    demi glace instead of demi glaze?
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  • LeiselEBLeiselEB member
    2500 Comments Second Anniversary 5 Love Its
    I'd work on centering the invite text. One trick is to print out a copy just on computer paper and fold in half - that will show you where you need to shift the lines.

    I would change RSVP to "Response" - the swirls of the font are really pretty, but when all clustered together it's hard to read and just looks too curly. I would actually just remove the parentheses from the menu choices, except for the kids meal.

    Others have pointed out some spelling errors.

    As for "venue" being over the graphic - if you switch that flower with the lighter colored one it will be much easier to read over the graphic. Alternatively, you could center the directions, because every other card has centered text but that one is left aligned. Might want to keep the alignment consistent throughout.

    hope that helps, good work so far :)
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  • ral11ral11 member
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    Thanks a lot for all your input, I really appreciate it.
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  • slpankuchslpankuch member
    Third Anniversary 100 Comments

    From a graphic designers point of view,
    There is a small issue that I see on the first page of your actual invite. The image of the flowers in the top left corner are cut off at the bottom of both flowers. Did you live trace this image? If so I would try to fill it in at the bottom of these images so it's not a straight cut off line.
    Same with the top right flower on the directions card.
    Otherwise it look good- and I agree with all the suggestions meantioned above.

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