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2nd Draft Advice Please

I am so happy that somewhere in all the laughter we grew a love.  A love that can not be descride even though it has been tried.  Today in front of our family and friends we begin the next chapter in our ever growing love story.


You are the thought that starts each morning and the conclusion to each day.You are the smile on my face and the warmth in my heart.
You are my silly, mature, caring, thoughtful, bright, and honest guy
The one that holds me tightly when I need to cry
You always understand me even when I don’t make sense
And after all these years you still give me butterflies in my chest.


Today I make these promises to you:I promise to give you the best of myself and to bring the best out of you
I promise to grow along with you, to be faithful to you and honest with you
I promise to be patient and understanding even if I don’t agree
I promise to love you in good times and bad, when life seems easy and when it seems hard, when our love is simple and when it is complex.


You are all I’ve wanted and all that I’ll ever need.  Completely and forever




BabyFruit Ticker

Re: 2nd Draft Advice Please

  • In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/special-topic-wedding-boards_vows_2nd-draft-advice-please?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Special%20Topic%20Wedding%20BoardsForum:24Discussion:45cbbfc7-6212-4e55-b731-a002521f7c85Post:0c856097-755e-420c-bba3-870f4f5a9eb5">2nd Draft Advice Please</a>:
    [QUOTE]I am so happy that somewhere in all the laughter we grew a love.   A love that can not be descride even though it has been tried.   Today in front of our family and friends we begin the next chapter in our ever growing love story. You are the thought that starts each morning and the conclusion to each day. You are the smile on my face and the warmth in my heart. You are my silly, mature, caring, thoughtful, bright, and honest guy The one that holds me tightly when I need to cry You always understand me even when I don’t make sense And after all these years you still give me butterflies in my chest. Today I make these promises to you: I promise to give you the best of myself and to bring the best out of you I promise to grow along with you, to be faithful to you and honest with you I promise to be patient and understanding even if I don’t agree I promise to love you in good times and bad, when life seems easy and when it seems hard, when our love is simple and when it is complex. You are all I’ve wanted and all that I’ll ever need.   Completely and forever
    Posted by nickimanny[/QUOTE]
      Those vows are  great and this is ur second draft... i'm just now working on my second draft... and still not sure it enough said about my dream guy... urs says it all.
  • These are really great! They are worded very eloquently. :)
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