I've been working on our invitations the past few days. I was hoping you ladies could tell me what you think. They fold up and become their own envelope with the response card at the bottom being a tear off postcard.
Here is a link (<-clicky) to my photobucket since sometimes it doesn't bring it up very big on TK
I know that techically FI's dad shouldn't be mentioned on the invitation since he is deceased. This was one of those "Choose your battles" situations. When I showed FI's mom the invites (purely so she felt somewhat involved) she said something about either including his dad or not including any parents names. My parents are hosting and it was important to me to have them on there. However I feel wierd listing them but not FI's mom. Wording it as I did makes it just a statement of parentage. She's not paying so I know she doesn't really get much of a say, but I've shot down a bunch of her other ideas (because I really really didn't like them and/or they were rude). I figured no one is getting hurt if I include him.
So, all that being said...is there anything I should consider changing? Punctuation? Spelling?
There will be an insert with the reception information and our website since I can't fit it in on the invitation itself. I just haven't figured out how to make it so the insert doesn't fall out of the invitation.
Thank you for reading all the way through this and for any help/advice you can give me.