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Danes983Danes983 member
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Can you look at this and tell me if I am missing anything?  Sorry to post and run but heading to lunch.

Accommodations                                                                     The Ramada Wayne             344 US Highway 46Wayne, NJ 07470973-256-7000  Please mention the Daddario-Cifelli Wedding to receive the special rate of $89/per night which includes breakfast.Guest rooms must be reserved no later than November 30, 2010 in order to receive the  Shuttle Service will be provided from the Ramada to the Brownstone Our Wedding Website:www.dana-and-simmie-tie-the-knot.com/">www.dana-and-simmie-tie-the-knot.com
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  • Danes983Danes983 member
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    edited December 2011
    Dont know why it got all scrunched like that. But it is better spaced in the document.
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  • jrgoogrljrgoogrl
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    edited December 2011
    I would add a "that" after Shuttle Service and a "." after Brownstone. Other than that it looks good to me.
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  • uppereastgirluppereastgirl member
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    edited December 2011
    the word "special rate" is missing before you start talking about the shuttle.  And there should be a period at the end of the next sentence.
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  • Heather822Heather822
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    edited December 2011
    Ours mentions Check In time also, which might be important info... in our case it is because ceremony is at 5, and check in time is not until 3, so I want people to have a realistic idea if they think they can get ready at the hotel or not...
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  • mariaNryan mariaNryan
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    edited December 2011
    check in time and check out time optional
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