I wouldn't post this on another board for fear of harsh criticism, but I really like you girls here. Plus, most of you know I've been having issues with my mom's overbearing opinions so... here I am. Most of this is what I'm envisioning and I just want to make sure it would look okay.
Here it goes:
Dress. This is what it looks like now. I'm going to have it shortened and taken in a little and take that sash/bow off and add another (pic below) I've been contemplating making the neckline a little more sweetheart...?
sash
My hair would be kind of like this (sort of but not really, my pics not coming up) and I have a chapel and blusher veil(s):
Jewelry?
Or
With
I was thinking for the reception (veils out), I would add a flower hair comb so it's not too plain?
And royal blue/sapphire ballet flats for shoes. I can't find any ATM so use your imagination.

Makeup. Soft, smokey grap eye maybe?
Whew! I think that's everything! I would appreciate if you girls could bounce some feedback to me since I don't have any girls around to help now. Usually FI is a pretty good advisor, but he doesn't know anything about my dress and can't help with this stuff. =/
Thoughts?