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jenniferbritojenniferbrito member
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Ladies my STD's will go out this week, can you check out my wedding web site and let me know if all looks ok or if corrections need to be made. I want to make sure im all set by the time thr STD's get out. =)

thank u!=-)

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  • SwazzleSwazzle member
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    It looks great!



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  • turtlesloveturtleslove
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    Just a couple little things-

    Your link above has a typo, there is an "m" instead of an "n"
    www.weddingwire.com/nunezwed

    Girl is not capitalized on your about us page for your dog's name.

    On the Reception page, I would have the first line of text start one row down if possible for better flow.

    Sorry if this is not what you were worried about, just trying to be a good proofer. Your site is beautiful and your day should be gorgeous! Love that you are having your little girl at the ceremony :)
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  • aprahamian2aprahamian2
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    Love it! A few little typos-

    Reception page- spelling of immediately
    Details page- spelling of hors d'oeuvres (it's such a weird word to write out, lol)
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  • bwilso5bwilso5
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    edited August 2012
    It looks great! A few typos though. Under accomodations the first offered is spelled wrong. Under ceremony complimentary, ceremony and immediately are also misspelled. Under the reception page immediately is misspelled. Also on the details page "the ceremony will be held in an outside on the..." doesn't make sense. Maybe remove the "in an" and just make it "the ceremony will be held outside on the..."
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  • ansannaansanna member
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    The quote that you have under "our story" is incorrect unless you wanted it that way. It is "I love you not only for who you are, but for who I am when I am with you"
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  • SwazzleSwazzle member
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    I am apparently the worst proof-reader ever hahaha 

    Sorry!



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  • sbc2013sbc2013
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    On the first page once you enter the site, you have "We'll be continuously updating our site..." but "continuously" should be "continually." 
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  • jenniferbritojenniferbrito member
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    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/wedding-club-boards_may-2013-weddings_wedding-website-3?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Wedding%20Club%20BoardsForum:ea657a87-d1dc-4588-999f-31c9deeef720Discussion:5d4af807-2e52-4770-8a73-ef2a721bc4c2Post:ce04d834-d274-402c-8d59-d60439385439">Re: Wedding Website</a>:
    [QUOTE]Just a couple little things- Your link above has a typo, there is an "m" instead of an "n" <a href="http://www.weddingwire.com/nunezwed" rel="nofollow">www.weddingwire.com/nunezwed</a> Girl is not capitalized on your about us page for your dog's name. On the Reception page, I would have the first line of text start one row down if possible for better flow. Sorry if this is not what you were worried about, just trying to be a good proofer. Your site is beautiful and your day should be gorgeous! Love that you are having your little girl at the ceremony :)
    Posted by turtleslove[/QUOTE]

    <div>No thank you I appreciate the advice, I have made the corrections. thank you =)</div>
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  • jenniferbritojenniferbrito member
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    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/wedding-club-boards_may-2013-weddings_wedding-website-3?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Wedding%20Club%20BoardsForum:ea657a87-d1dc-4588-999f-31c9deeef720Discussion:5d4af807-2e52-4770-8a73-ef2a721bc4c2Post:fcdac655-4bea-4131-887c-993a4732ba5d">Re: Wedding Website</a>:
    [QUOTE]Love it! A few little typos- Reception page- spelling of immediately Details page- spelling of hors d'oeuvres (it's such a weird word to write out, lol)
    Posted by aprahamian2[/QUOTE]

    <div>Thank you for catching those =)</div>
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  • jenniferbritojenniferbrito member
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    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/wedding-club-boards_may-2013-weddings_wedding-website-3?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Wedding%20Club%20BoardsForum:ea657a87-d1dc-4588-999f-31c9deeef720Discussion:5d4af807-2e52-4770-8a73-ef2a721bc4c2Post:3829341d-a803-4747-9fb6-6f07555f7228">Re:Wedding Website</a>:
    [QUOTE]It looks great! A few typos though. Under accomodations the first offered is spelled wrong. Under ceremony complimentary, ceremony and immediately are also misspelled. Under the reception page immediately is misspelled. Also on the details page "the ceremony will be held in an outside on the..." doesn't make sense. Maybe remove the "in an" and just make it "the ceremony will be held outside on the..."
    Posted by bwilso5[/QUOTE]

    <div>Thank you =)</div>
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  • jenniferbritojenniferbrito member
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    Thank you everyone =)
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