Mock up of my Invitations - PIP

czarinamae · January 2011

My fabulous DOC, Christina Molina just sent me a mock up of my invites and i LOVE them! It will be printed on white with a purple border and will come in a purple pocketfold with matching RSVP card and an extra card for directions/parking.

What do you guys think?

Vans18 · January 2011

I think it looks very pretty, I love the style and colors. Good Job.

Although, the bottom line looks a bit off maybe because its on the center, I'm not sure if its just me but it looks like maybe it would look better if its aligned on the left like the rest of the info.

Good job!

They are going to look really pretty!

Mellie35 · January 2011

Overall, I think they look good.

A couple of things -

I think the "we" gets lost because of how the font changes.

And, the word "immediately" is spelled wrong.

And, I agree with Vans about the bottom line.

penaltyshot · January 2011

The first thing I noticed was that it looks like it says "CAUSE" at the top. The B and most of the E are covered by the flower. I'm also not a fan of the spacing on the entire thing (very open at top and cramped on bottom).

I do like the inspiration though and they will be very pretty!

czarinamae · January 2011

Thanks for all your advice. Yah, we caught the misspelling too! Will be sure to get those things modifies. So great to be able to have many eyes taking a look!